Above is my finished Visual Poem! Please watch and enjoy!
This past week, we had to turn in another video that we created in G.T. class, but this time, instead of having groups, we made this project individually The project video is supposed to be a visual poem. My poem video is about entertainment such as dancing, singing, acting, ad watching things. It is called " Show-Time. " The visual film of the poem impacts the the video because it gives the viewer more information, like if they don't understand the poem.
The special effects in my video helps the video go from good to great by giving more interest into the video and gives better transitions in between films to the next. Also it gives a cooler mood to the viewer, especially with the effects that relate to entertainment.
I am satisfied with my finish product. I love the way that I got to successfully put everything together without help and it worked out great. I think if I had a little more time getting more b-roll or films for my visual, then it would of been " off the hook! "
Following is my Visual Poem Plan. Where I planned out everything.
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ReplyDeleteGreat humor.
ReplyDeleteMusic could have been added.
I liked the creativity of your special effects.
Nice smooth sequencing. Musics to overpowering. Nice use of split screen.
ReplyDeleteI really like how your poem had a nice flow to it.
ReplyDeleteNext time turn down the audio a little.
Really fun topic though!!
Hi Kaylynn! Nice poem, I really liked how your audio is clear. One thing that you could change is to lower your volume. Overall, your video was really great, and I liked how you made that one scene where you used 4 different clips at one time.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I like how you added a lot of effects to your poem. I would recommend getting more shots and clips outside of school. The music that you added gave the poem a certain mood which was nice.
ReplyDeleteLike you're topic. Its a little weird how you wrote you're poem to me its almost not a poem. Voice over really clear.
ReplyDeleteI liked the acting, it really caught my attention.
ReplyDeleteSome of your B-role could be more clear
The music really sucked me in when it started
Nice poem! I like the different effects to the different videos like the when there was four videos playing all together. One thing you could of worked on would be the audio and the music in the background. You could of lowered the volume. But other than that Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat acting and B-roll, like your effects :D
ReplyDeleteMaybe could've slowed down the words, " Are you not Entertained?" by slowing it down and turn down the beginning audio.
Great acting and I really like your dances and your representations of singing, dancing, watching and learning Great!
Hey Kaylynn. I really like your ending because it leaves off at a satisfying note and makes us think a little more. One I thing I suggest is to lower down your music audio down in the beginning because it was extremely loud. However, it was lowered down half way through the poem so that was nice. I really liked your variety of B-Roll as it really matched your poem. Also, your expression in your voice was really good. Keep up the good work Kaylynn.
ReplyDeleteVery nice visual effects, especially when you showed the four video clips at once, in synchronization with your audio. I thought that some of your B-Roll could be improved with it's relevance. (For example, the last clip at the very end didn't exactly apply). I really liked how you had the last text layover saying "It's showtime" with the curtains, it was very applicable.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was alright.
ReplyDeleteYour backround music didn't match, and your B-Roll wasn't very good.
Your ending was enjoyable.
I liked how it had a nice rhythm to it. I was wondering what the last shot was of. I loved how your voiceover was really clear, and it music matched.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you read your poem, with expression that captured our attention. The background noise was a bit overwhelming at a few points though, maybe ramp the audio or turn it down. Great entertaining poem!
ReplyDelete- Great Voiceover! Nice and Clear
ReplyDelete- Maybe add a little bit more b-roll at the end of the video because you could see either April or Iris holding your paper for you.
- I liked how you made the whole video flow and rhyme.
I really liked how you added a lot of cool effects!
ReplyDeleteI think if you added some background music instead of sound effects, I think it would make your poem a lot more meaningful.
I also liked how you added lots of different b-roll.
Great job Kaylynn! The transitions (especially watching 4 B-Roll at once!) were amazing!
ReplyDeleteThe audio could be lowered.
The voiceovers/poem was read clearly, and showed emotions, especially during the end.
Awesome job!
I liked the way that you showed your visuals with your poem. There were minor things that you could have edited with the audio and shots. Your voiceover was read well with lots of emotion.
ReplyDeleteI like the stage curtain when you said its show time. The music in the beginning makes it hard to hear the poem. good job with the effects.
ReplyDelete1.) Great job! I really liked how you had various b-roll clips showing all at once.
ReplyDelete2.) I believe you could have gotten more b-roll outside of school.
3.) I also really liked how your voice had expression throughout your whole video, especially the part where you said "Show Time!"
Your sound effects were fun and added character to your poem
ReplyDeletewhile the effects were great, they were sometimes loud and unnecessary
Your poem had a perfect amount of humor
I liked how you you did a split screen, putting the four different clips together was really cool. Maybe you could take out the last part with April, it didn't make much sense with her in it. Your voiceover was read well and I could understand it easily.
ReplyDeleteI love your music it fits awesome with your concept and very catchy. When someone is singing use someone with not chapped lips >:-( o_O you did great with putting emotion into your visual poem! SO AWESOME!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the music and it was very entertaining. Awesome video, the setup was cool.
ReplyDeletethe sound went away for a bit and there was a little sound from one of the clips.
other than that, it was hard to think of any critiques. Great poem, it kept my eyes glued to the screen.
great acting b-roll great effects. love your ideas!!
ReplyDeleteIf I was making the video i would put more translations. and also put more layouts
over all i tought it was great!